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Friday, March 29, 2019

plastic bag island

me and carmen have just finished our plasis bag island slide show

5 comments:

  1. Nabraska,

    Well done on your research project. I like the use of statistics to back up what you are saying. You have done a great job of choosing effective pictures to enhance your text. It is well written in your own words and Having small chunks of text on each slide is easier for your reader to digest (no pun intended.)

    Two things to consider for next time. 1) when you are editing make sure you check for place names requiring capital letters as there are a few of these missing. 2) Consider putting your recommendations on the final page as bullet points. Shaping the text this way makes your message more effective.

    Ka rawe.

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  2. I love how you used different colours for the text because the background and text go really well together. I also like how you included A how we can help slide It is really informative and creative. WELL DONE GUYS!!!

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  3. I loved the size comparison. The actions that you can do slide is really cool. well done

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  4. Hi Nsbraska! good job i think you did a really good job and i loved the pictures.
    seya

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  5. Kia ora Nabraska,
    I'm Caylah from Parkview Parua School Team Kotuku I like the way you added lots of picture and the right amount text. It made me think of when I made a slide about plastic bags and rubbish. Maybe next time you could you could add more information about why you did it. anyways keep up the great work.

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